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School of Magic RP: Cadance

Name: Cadenza "Cadance" D'Amore
Age: 25-28
Species: Human
Powers: Love manipulation and love magic
Occupation: Member of the High Magic Council.
Personality: Sweet and kind to a fault, Cadance is very patient and willing to listen to those who need it. Her loving nature matches well with her powers as someone who has enough trust in her emotions and that of others that she doesn’t feel too serious of a need to use them. Her warm personality doesn’t mean she can’t or won’t fight for those she cares about. Hurt someone close to her and thou shall pay.
Many have not taken Cadance's powers seriously compared to the more physical and elemental powers by other magic users, and have attempted to coax her into using them. She ignores them because it’s a tactic of manipulation and unnecessary. Admittedly she has felt like her powers might’ve given her und
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School of Magic: Science Class
Teacher: Syndrome
Summary: This class is for those who wish to learn about the scientific understanding of the world and of their own magic abilities and powers (that is if a student has them). While learning about basics in science such as the scientific method, genetics, basic physics and chemistry, and biological constructs this class will also look to explore the latest news in science, experiment with power and how they effect the natural science or scientific laws. The work will be hands-on activities and sometimes call to go outside for more room to experiment.
Requirements: 
A creative mindIntense focus and concentrationUnderstanding of basicsGood listening skillsExperimentationItems Needed: 
NotebooksBindersGoggles and gloves (much will be provided)Graphing paperBlank sheets of paperElements or elements starters (matches, liquids of any kind, pieces of metal or random metallic or mostly metallic object, rocks, leaves or some sort
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School of Magic RP: Snow White

Name: Snow White
Nickname(s): Snow, Snowy, SW
Age: 14
Species: Human
Powers: Empathy/ Emotional Manipulation
Occupation: Student at Arcane Magi Academy, waitress at the Lucky Mouse Café
Personality: Snow White is while lacking in physical prowess makes up for it in her kind, loving nature to everyone. However, because this she can be naïve and too trusting of people resulting in her being taken advantage. Very rarely does Snow White have a bad word to say about anyone and mostly seeing the best whenever possible. If she did have a problem with someone she just tries to grin and bear it or try to put on a guise of happiness. Such was the case of her stepmother where she just never really felt happy with her father's remarriage, but kept those feelings to herself since her father was happy and she did need a mother at that time.
Snow's is can be seen as traditionally feminine in how she prefer
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School of Magic RP: Merida

Name:
Merida Dunbroch
Nickname: Mer
Age: 16
Species: Human 
Powers: None
Occupation: Student at Arcane Magi Academy
Personality: Merida is a strong, fiery, brave young woman who's seen as more of a tomboy in how she feels her happiest doing physical activities such as sports, (her favorites being archery and sword fighting). Yet she's rather impatient and self-centered with how she's often more focused on her own interests in the moment that of anyone else. This tendency to lack interests has caused some strained between her and her mother resulting her to be more open in her rebellion.
However, behind the angry, brattiness she is also has some insecurities on how her mother wants her to be and what they both think is best for her. Much of the time it has lead Merida to become something of a loner with how she rather do things her own thing like archery and if she wanted cer
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School of Magic RP: Syndrome

Name(s):
Buddy Pine (real name)
Other Names: Professor Syndrome (by the students of his class and faulty), Professor Flamehead (students behind his back)
Age: 25-32
Species: Human
Powers: Technopathy
Occupation: Science Teacher at Arcane Magi Academy
Personality: Syndrome considers himself to be the cool, fun, teacher in his lessons. The type that acts like an entertainer in his lectures, experiments and just enjoying what he does. He can be sarcastic and a smartass to the students, especially those who either talk back or make smart-mouth responses to him. However, behind his rather hammy and snarky personality is an deep envy for magic users and desire to get back at them by wanting to everyone powers and so hides that bitter part of himself by acting as Genre Savvy as he can be.
Syndrome is also very intelligent as whenever he's not teaching his students the sciences
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School of Magic RP: Korra

Name: Korra
Age: 17
Species: Human
Powers: Water Manipulation
Occupation: Student at Arcane Magi Academy
Personality: Korra is what can be seen as the typical tough, brutish and fiery girl despite the magic style she has been brought up by. She sees much of her self-worth in her magic having grown up in a family of powerful water manipulators, healers, and spiritualists.
Korra's stubbornness is what gets her into the most trouble as she goes into things without thinking. When she fails at something she usually takes it to heart whether it's by lashing out at people, keeping it to herself or just denial. Her failures also affect her confidence as she prides herself on being capable, independent, and helpful to others.
Despite her temperament and aggressive behavior she has a fierce loyalty to her friends and family and the compassion needed to help others. Korea also displays a sense of
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It was quiet, far too quiet for his liking. Normally a certain reckless officer would speed down the streets to chase down a suspect, normally some harmless culprit of some sort. But when Doc sensed no sign of a blue Corvette, that's when he starts to worry.
He had enough looking after his youngest son, but Lightning never looked for trouble unlike some other. For now, no problems had disturbed any of them since the kidnapping. Well...except for Sky almost throwing a fit when she heard Chick had attempted to harm her best friend and it weren't an easy feat to calm her.
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I wasn’t a fan of Fantastic Mr. Fox but I’m digging this. Though why do they keep staring in front? Are they going to eat my soul?
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Pixargirl: Welcome back babes! Let’s get this show on the road. No pun intended… seriously.

WARNING: CHAPTER 6 INCLUDES PHYSICAL AND EMOTIONAL ABUSE OF A CHILD AND NEGLECT!

 

Chapter 4: The Advice

Hello Everyone. Here is chapter 4 and I hope that you will like it. :) 

Pixargirl: Nope it’s just dull. However I won’t be at this alone.

YO CAL, STRIP! WEATHERS BOYS GET OVER HERE!

*two racecars in light blue paint drive over, confused at being yelled but being otherwise unfazed by the human girl* 

Let me introduce you to my sporking partners for these chapters. New to the series is number 42, Cal Weathers, replacement for his uncle, Strip “The King” Weathers, and an absolute cinnamon roll.

CalWeathers by Pixargirl

Cal: Hey I- I’m sorry what? 

Pixargirl: And of course a character who was in the first movie and this scene and actually appears in this chapter, Strip “The King” *snorts immaturely* Weathers!

The king by Pixargirl

The King: Uh, kid, what were you laughin’ at?

Pixargirl: Nothing! Nothing… Let’s get to the sporking, sirs.

 

I still had tears forming in my eyes before I heard a voice coming from behind me and it was the King himself who I was happy to see although he had a worried expression on his face which I noticed as I quickly tried to regain control of myself.

The King: You said this was from the Dinoco 400 tie, right? I don’t remember anyone cryin’ afterwards.

Pixargirl: Oops! Keyboarded you two to not freak out about human me, but forgot to keyboard you guys info on Enzo from the story.

Cal: That does answer-

*keyboards the info onto them*

 

He patted me on the hood and I knew that he felt sorry for me which comforted me a little before I quickly began to wipe away the tears although I wasn't bothered if anyone else had seen me crying since I also wasn't bothered by what they were saying.

The King: Then why’d you put yourself together when… I saw… you? This is weird.

Pixargirl: Yeah I’m sorry.

 

"Hey mister the King" I said as I continued to wipe away my tears. "I'm sorry that you had to see me like this".

"It's ok buddy" said the King, comfortingly. "Do you care to explain to me about what made you upset?".

Cal: What happened to him? A family member died? A serious injury?

Pixargirl: No. Just him whining.

 

"Well, it's my friend Lightning" I admitted. "I was crying because he was acting very arrogant and very selfish which really worries me".

Cal: Lightning was really that bad, huh?

Pixargirl and The King: Yep. 

Pixargirl: I hated him.

 

"I understand" said the King, nodding his head in agreement. "Don't worry, I will have a word with him about and I hope he listens".

I’M A NICE GUY, RIGHT? – 11

Pixargirl: Putting three points down because if it’s bothering you that much, than you need to talk to him. Don’t let other people fix your problems. Quit fishing for sympathy!

 

"Thanks mister the King" I said, happily. "I really do appreciate what you're doing for me".

The King: I was goin’ to do that on my own… I didn’t really need to be told that.

Pixargirl: Yeah well in OC insertion fics, canon characters have no agency and have to be told by the OC to do a thing they did in canon.

 

"No problem buddy" said the King as he drove away. "I'll see you later". 

I waved good-bye to him before I turned my attention to Lightning who I hoped would take this moment as a lesson that arrogance and selfishness will only get you so far while showing sportsmanship and caring for others is more important.

Cal: Uh what lesson? Nothing really happened for him to learn anything.

HAND HOLDING - 8

 

Suddenly I saw Chick Hicks and his pit crew heading towards me and Lightning which I knew that it can't be good since Chick Hicks loves to gloat about winning the piston cup as well as become the new face of Dinoco when the King retires.

Pixargirl: Good observation, never would’ve figure that out. 

HAND HOLDING - 9

 

I just knew that Lightning would become a carbon-copy of Chick Hicks if he kept on being arrogant and selfish which is what he was currently doing although I really hoped that he would avoid becoming another Chick Hicks.

Cal: Okay has Lightning shown any sign of crashin’ cars?

The King: No, he was just more of idiot who needed good smack of reality before he gets himself kill.

Pixargirl: Yeah like, while I don’t think Lightning would resort to smashing and crashing cars like Chick does, he does have that dangerous and reckless ego, both are obsessed with winning and being the best.

Lightning could’ve ended up like Chick but it’s more based around the circumstances. The race in Los Angeles would’ve been different had Lightning not ended up in Radiator Springs. Lightning wouldn’t have a pit crew still, Chick would’ve still pulled that crash with you Stri- *snort, before pulling herself together* I mean, Mr. Weathers, and the race would’ve probably be kind of a stalemate or something as to who would be least controversial in getting the cup and Dinoco.

HAND HOLDING - 10

 

"McQueen, seriously, that was some pretty darn nice racing out there...BY ME!" shouted Chick Hicks

Pixargirl: I forgot how much Chick shouts at random.

 

 which caught Lightning's attention. "Welcome to the Chick Era, baby!".

"That's really funny Chick" I said, sarcastically since I didn't find it very funny at all. "Besides, racing is suppose to be about showing sportsmanship not arrogance".

Cal: Yeah but you also kinda have to win. You can get payback on them after the race.

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 11


"Whatever and you do want to know something else?" asked Chick Hicks, eagerly while I just rolled my eyes. "The Piston Cup? It's mine, dude, it's mine".

"Hahaha" I laughed, sarcastically knowing that chick was too blinded by his obsession with the piston cup to notice. "Actually the piston cup won't be yours Chick even if you do win it".

The King: Yeah it kinda is legally his.

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 12

Cal: Wow… and I thought was bad at comebacks.

Pixargirl: You still are. But you’re an absolute cinnamon roll because of it.

Cal: What?

 

"Hey fellas, how do you think I'll look in Dinoco Blue?" asked Chick as he ignored me before laughing. " DINOCO BLUE! Ahahaha!".

The King: Yeah I could hear all way.

Pixargirl: So they let you and Cal keep the trademarked color even after you retired?

 

"In your dreams, Thunder" said Lightning before he looked at me as he whispered something. "He has no idea what that means".

HAND HOLDING - 11
THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS! - 13

Pixargirl: …Shoot me with an arrow.

 

"Yeah, well..."Thunder"?" asked Chick Hicks, confused as I tried to hide a snicker. " What's he talking about, "Thunder"?".

"Oh, you know" said Lightning as a smirk appeared on his face. "Because 'Thunder' always comes after Lightning! Ka-chow!".

Pixargirl: Oh sure, you’re close enough to Lightning and Chick to hear their little dick-measuring contest, but not to hear Chick’s confusion with what the hell Lightning’s talking about. BE CONSISTENT WITH WHAT ENZO’S HEARING!

 

I watched Lightning do some poses before I drove off to meet with some of my fans just to pass the time

Cal: (as Enzo) Eh, talking to talking to my friend about his attitude can wait. I have to also indulge in my fame.

Pixargirl: Good comeback Cal! *smirks to self*

ENZO THE STATUE - 8

 

 and I had a great time with them especially with all of the selfies that they took of me standing with them and I bet it was a dream come true for them.

Pixargirl: SELFIES WERE NOT A THING IN 2005! 

The King: You know, we’re all kinda aware of the fans being excited and happy to see us and that’s great, it really is. I just think we should be a little more relaxed when it comes it.

Pixargirl: Problem with first-person really, While it can be true, the way Enzo’s saying it sounds really… self indulgent or egotistical in a way.

 

The little ones came to have their autographs signed and I signed their autographs much to their joy since I love kids especially the young ones who have this cute little smile that can you love them from the moment that you see them.

Cal: That’s actually really nice. These kids look up to him and he’s being really respectful and cool about them. It kind of reminds me of when I went to my first race.

The King: I remember that. Your aunt Lynda had to hold you back at the pits so you wouldn’t get swept up by the first lap.

Cal: And after the race I asked you for an autograph, and you said…

The King and Cal: You already got one from the permission slip.

 

I had finished signing their autographs and I watched as the security began to take my fans away again much to my sadness since I love hanging out with them

Cal: You could just say that they’re with you or somethin’.

Pixargirl: How did kids even get to this place by themselves? Let alone through security.

 

 but two voices had caught my attention and I turned only to see the two familiar twin female cars who were standing in front of Lightning.

Pixargirl: Familiar? When did you-?

We jumped onto the race car that was on top of the pile and we literally flew through the air where I managed to catch a glimpse of Lightning sticking out his tongue before he winked and pointed his front-right tire at what I guessed was his fans.

Pixargirl: Oh… You know, I know he didn’t know their names but defining features might’ve been nice to know that he was pointing to two Mazda Miatas in red and adorn with Lightning McQueen stickers.

 

"I'm Mia" said one of the twin female cars.

"I'm Tia" said the other before they began to talk at the same time. "We're like your biggest fans! Ka-chow".

"I love being me" said Lightning as he smiled at them before security came once again.

ENZO THE STATUE- 9

Pixargirl: …And you forgot to add they were flashing their headlights at him along with how he was saying that.

Cal: They flashed their headlights and he was enjoying it? Man, Lightning was a perve back in the day.

Pixargirl: Yeah it’s basically the human equivalent of them showing off their tits.

Flashing boobs by Pixargirl

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Cal: *confused* Umm… okay. 

The King: Huh? 

Pixargirl: HUMANS! Also just felt the need to illustrate the point more thoroughly.

 

"Okay, girls" said one security car as he took them away. "That's it". 

"We love you, Lightning" said Mia and Tia as they were taken away.

McQueen chuckled before he blew a kiss at them as I slowly drove over to him and

Pixargirl: You're not going to call him out are you? Yeah, ogling at a lady's breast is okay if they lady or ladies in this case allow you to, but considering that Enzo will speak out to Lightning about how he was talking Sally in a later chapter I think this would be something in character for him to tell Lightning to be respectful.

I’M A NICE GUY, RIGHT? – 12


I soon ended up beside him when the King appeared before us which made me smile knowing that he was going to have a word with Lightning about his crazy stunt. 

ENZO THE STATUE- 10

The King: I was still goin’ to talk to the kid. I wasn't doin’ it for you.

Pixargirl: You see what mean? Enzo kept going on and on about “having a word” with Lightning that instead has everyone else fixes his problems.

 

I gave Lightning a gently nudge to let him know that the King was here to speak with him and Lightning straightened himself up knowing that he was about to talk to a veteran racer that knows what is like to be on the track.

Pixargirl: Uh… Enzo, you’ve been racing in the circuit longer than Lightning. Shouldn't you already know what it's like?

 

"Hey, buddy" said the King. "You're one gutsy racer". 

"Oh, hey, Mr. The King" said Lightning before he turned to me. "Please don't tell me that you have spoken to him already".

Pixargirl: SEE! This seems to imply Enzo does this regularly!

 

"You got more talent in one lug nut than a lot of cars has got in their whole body" said the King. "You really do".

The King: That's repetitive.

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 7 
THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 14

 

 

"Really? Oh, that" said Lightning, happily before he was suddenly cut off and rather rudely I must say. 

Cal: Yeah that's kinda to be expected from him.

 

"But you're stupid" said the King which shocked Lightning and it shocked me too since I didn't think the King would go THAT far.

Pixargirl: Good lord sometimes you can't afford politeness.

The King: It’s called honesty. I ain't gonna sugarcoat someone messin’ around and playing daredevil on the track.

 

"Excuse me?" asked Lightning, shocked.

"This ain't a one-man deal, kid" said the King. "You need to wise up and get yourself a good crew chief and a good team. You ain't gonna win unless you got good folks behind you and you let them do their job, like they should. Like I tell the boys at the shop".

"A good team" said Lightning as he looked over at the Dinoco performers. "Yeah".

Cal: Performers? You mean the pit crew and crew chief? Yeah there's also the helicopter and the Dinoco girls but the good team that-

Pixargirl: No. That's just Enzo being an idiot.

 Dinoco by Pixargirl
 

I closed my eyes in annoyance knowing that Lightning wasn't paying attention to what the King was trying to say to him and it was some good piece of advice that could very well save Lightning's whole career from his arrogance and selfishness. 

The King: …In hindsight I should've known he wasn't listening.

Pixargirl: You didn't know he went to La La Land? Granted you were still talking after his fantasy…

 

Lightning kept on day-dreaming about Dinoco and I looked at the King which he responded by looking at me before I silently told him that Lightning wasn't listening to him and he only needed to look at Lightning once to know that I was right.

Pixargirl: Yeah Strip *snorts* was talking to a brick wall at this point.

Lightning in Daydream land by Pixargirl

 

Chapter 5: The Sponsors part 1

Hello Everyone. Here is chapter 5 and I hope that you will enjoy it. :)

Minutes had begun to fly past but for me it felt like an eternity as I looked at Lightning who had a dreamy expression on his face which gave the only hint I needed to know that he was still day-dreaming about Dinoco. 

Pixargirl: In movie time it was only forty one seconds. But it seemed like Mr. Weathers was talking for longer than that so…

 

I looked at the King and I apologised to him knowing that the King probably wasn't feeling very happy about being ignored by a rookie but he gave a comforting smile to let me that he forgives me which makes me sigh in relief.

The King: You didn’t do anything wrong for me to forgive you.

The King knew that he had to get Lightning to pay attention 

Pixargirl: Why don’t you do it? I know violence isn’t the solution, yatta, yatta, yatta, but I think if your friend is being rude to someone than sometime you have get back to reality with a little pain.

Smack To The Head by Pixargirl


and so he had finally decided to end his advice in order to snap Lightning out of his day-dreaming state so he can start paying attention to what he had to say.

Cal: You seriously didn’t know he was daydreaming?

The King: Well I’m sorry if I couldn’t read the kid’s mind. Tried to help him, got ignored end of story.

 

"If you figure that out" said the King as he ended his advice to Lightning. "You just gonna be OK".

"Oh, yeah, that" said Lightning as he finally snapped out of his day-dreaming state. "That is spectacular advice. Thank you, Mr. The King".

"I really hope that you were listening" said the King, seriously. "Because your friend told me that he is worried about the way that you are acting, just be careful".

Pixargirl: HE DIDN’T DO IT FOR ENZO!

The King: Well there goes my hearin’.

Pixargirl: SHUT UP CAL! NOBODY ASKED FOR YOUR OPINION!

Cal: I-I didn’t even do anything.

Pixargirl: Sorry Cal-Cal. *looks at phone to check the time*

 

Lightning was stunned by what he was hearing

Pixargirl: Why? Lightning literally said this last chapter when Mr Weath- I mean Strip *snorts* came to talk to him:

"Please don't tell me that you have spoken to him already".
So Lightning already figured that Enzo had Strip *snort* go and talk to him.

 

 and he quickly looked at me with a worried expression but I mouthed to him that we will have a talk about that later although I could tell that he really wanted to know right now. 

All three: Then why don’t you?

We suddenly got excited as the announcer began to announce the result of the race that we had all been waiting for and I knew that Lightning was the most excited since he thought that he had won the piston cup. 

"Ladies and gentle-cars" said the announcer. "For the first in piston cup history".

Pixargirl: (as an announcer) We have Gary Stu as racer! 

Cal: Wouldn’t an ellipsis be necessary for that part?

 

"A rookie had won the piston cup" said Lightning before he drove onto the podium. "YES!".

"We have a four-way tie" said the announcer which caused everyone to begin cheering.

ENZO THE STATUE- 12

Cal: Uh… okay the three-way was an unexpected, but plausible but the four way feels less so… 

Pixargirl: …I really wish I knew auto racing because I want to give a math mathematic possibility of how unlikely this would happen.

 

I was surprised that it was a four-way tie since I personally thought that I won the race although I really wanted to hear that the King had won the race especially when it's his last race of his entire career but I guess it wasn't meant to be.

The King: Thanks for the reminder. 

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 8
HAND HOLDING- 12

 

The King and I along with Chick Hicks joined Lightning on the podium where I saw him standing there with a stunned expression on his face since he really did thought that he had become the first rookie to have won the piston cup. 

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 9
HAND HOLDING- 13

Pixargirl: GAH! We get it!

 

"Hey, McQueen, that must be really embarrassing" mocked Chick hicks. "But I wouldn't worry about it... because I didn't do it! HA-HA-HA!".

"Chick would you please just shut up for once" I said as I got annoyed with his arrogance. "You really can be annoying sometimes".

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 10

 

"Piston cup officials have determined that a tie-breaker race" said the announcer. "Between the three leaders will be held in California in one week".

I was surprised that one week was all that it seemed to take to get to California 

The King: It really doesn’t.

Pixargirl: Not unless you want to waste time and go through twenty different stops.

 

 but I remained sceptical since anything could happen during that one week and I began to prepare myself for any trouble that might be coming my way.

Pixargirl: QUIT HOLDING MY HAND!

HAND HOLDING- 14

Cal: Hey, hey! Calm down.

Pixargirl: Okay fine! *looks up stuff on her phone*

 

Lightning quickly looked at me and he was as surprised as I was after I had heard the announcement but I shrugged in response since I had no idea what was going to happen during that one week of travelling but I quickly mouthed to Lightning to be patient and he seemed to take it in stride.

"Well thank you, thanks to all of ya out there, thank you" said Chick before he turned to Lightning. "Hey rook, first one to California gets Dinoco all to himself".

Cal: Well thank the Manufacturer I got it.

Pixargirl: Surprise no one accused you of nepotism with the whole, “taking on the sponsorship that my immediate uncle had” thing.

Cal: Oh there were, that’s why I seem to be the butt of everyone’s jokes.

Pixargirl: Seem to be?

 

"So you say Chick but I got a feeling that Lightning is going to take that as a challenge" I said. "Also Chick, you should stop being selfish while you still have the chance".

The King: Who the hell says that upfront like that?

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 15

The King: And kid, I’ve known him for years, tried to tell him to quit bein’ a jackass before, and it got me crashed to the field.

 

I knew that he would ignore me and I guessed correctly when I heard him talking to somebody else in the crowd before we finally got off the podium and to our trucks in order to get going to California as soon as possible.

ENZO THE STATUE- 13

Cal: Did they just teleport into the lot?

 

Lightning and I silently drove back to our respective trucks with Chick's 'challenge' still deep in our minds since this could be our chance at payback or it could simply be a trick just so he can make the fools out of us.

Pixargirl: Oh for the love of-! Are you implying that Chick sent the delinquent road hazards to get Lightning lost. That was more of a happy accident of them finding an extremely tired Mack, who was pulling a famous dude, and screw around with him. They didn’t seem to have intended on Lightning getting lost.

 

"First one to California gets Dinoco all to himself" muttered Lightning. "Oh we'll see who gets there first, Chick".

"Take it easy Lightning since it could all be a trick" I said. "You just never know what someone like Chick is up to".

The King: What trick?

 

"I know Enzo but Chick really gets on my nerves" said Lightning. "Perhaps this is my big opportunity to get my pay...Huh?".

Cal: Check?

 

Lightning had suddenly stopped and I wondered why he stopped but I quickly noticed that his truck was gone but so was mine although I had a strange feeling that my truck has gone to somewhere that I probably know already.

Pixargirl: *looks at her phone bored before perking up* Oh my gosh!

Cal: What? 

Pixargirl: Your voice actor tried to do country music and OH SWEET MOTHER OF NATY WHAT IS THAT HAIR!

 

Soon enough Lightning's truck and my truck had finally appeared from seemingly nowhere and they had smiles on their faces as they gave us their congratulations

Pixargirl: BEHOLD! The disappearing-reappearing trucks!

 

on the race which I took in stride while Lightning didn't.

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN- 7

Cal: Of course he did.

 

"Hey kid" said Lightning's truck. "Congrats on the tie".

"I don't want to talk about it" said Lightning. "Let's go Mack saddle up,

Pixargirl: It’s lines like this from Lightning that make me remember that Owen Wilson is from Texas.

 

 what'd you do with my trailer?".

The King: Had it sent to the wash. Somethin’ about Stu-germs?

 

"I parked it at your Sponsor's tent" said Mack before he turned to me. "Hey Enzo, congrats on the tie".

Pixargirl: (as Mack) I’m obligated to repeating the same thing to both you and Lightning.

 

"Thanks Mack, I really appreciate it" I said as I smiled at gratefully at Mack. "So, you parked Lightning's trailer at his sponsor's tent, I see".

Cal: He just said that. 

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 11

 

"What?" asked Lightning, shocked. "You can't be serious".

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 17

Pixargirl: Seriously though, that doesn’t flow after Enzo just spoke.

 

"You gotta make your personal appearance" said Mack. "Also Enzo is going to make his personal appearance too, right Enzo?".

The King: …Do you really need reassurance for someone who isn’t your client?

 

"That's right Mack" I said before I noticed my truck. "Hey Mark, I guess you heard that there is going to be a four-way tie-breaker race in California".

"Yes I did boss" said Mark as he smiled at me. "I gotta say that was one hell of a race".

Pixargirl: Yeah keep saying that I’m sure someone gonna believe it eventually.

 

I nodded in agreement before we slowly began driving over to my sponsor's tent while we heard Lightning begging Mack not to allow to make a personal appearance with his sponsors which I rolled my eyes at how childish that Lightning was being.

Mark and I finally got to my sponsor's tent where I took a chance to peak in only to see many of my fans there waiting for me which made me smile knowing that I loved being with my fans since they are the main reason why I love racing.

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN- 8 

Cal: Is that really necessary? 

Pixargirl: Yes!

Cal: Well I’m just sayin’ it’s a genuinely nic-

Pixargirl: I’m just happy I don’t have to see Lightning’s sponsor speaking scene. I hated him there and how he was acting and how much of a dick he was so move on to the next chapter!
           



Chapter 6: The Sponsors part 2

Hello Everyone. Here is chapter 6 and I hope that you will enjoy it. :)

Pixargirl: Ugh… Here we go.

Cal: Pix, I think you may be a little harsh the story and this kid. Yeah he’s bland and dull as a rock but he’s at least nice.

Pixargirl: Just wait…

 

Mark must have noticed that I was smiling since he gave me a gentle nudge and I turned to him only to see that he was also smiling and he told me it was time to make my appearance while he gets hooked up to the trailer.

I watched Mark go before I eventually make myself known by driving slowly into the tent and my fans as well as my sponsors saw before they went wild with happiness at the fact that I was right there in front of them. before their very eyes.

             

Entrance by Pixargirl


           

A young girl wanted me to sign her autograph and I signed it with a smile on my face since I loved making my younger fans happy to meet their hero which in this case was me and I loved being around my fans especially the younger ones.

The King: None of y’all gonna say anything!

Pixargirl: No problem. 

Cal: Done.

 

"You're awesome Enzo!" shouted a male elderly van as he shook tires with me. "I am your biggest fan!".

"Thanks for the compliment" I said as I smiled at the male elderly van. "Do you want me to sign your autograph too?".

Pixargirl: (as random fan) No I want you to kiss my bumper!

 

"Yes please!" shouted the male elderly van, happily. "That would be such a honour!".

Cal: A “u” in “honor?” You said the author is British right?

Pixargirl: Yeah. Lovely people really.

Cal: Never said they weren’t…

 

I smiled as I began signing his autograph and I had just finished signing it when a young boy wanted his autograph signed too much to my happiness since I loved signing autographs since it allows me to connect and interact with my fans.

All of my fans had gathered around me since they too wanted me to sign their autographs and take selfies with them which I gladly accepted

Pixargirl: 

The King: What was that all about?

Pixargirl: I’m not quite angry to explode yet, but still annoyed that I want explode so that’s my substitute. Also this:

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN-12 


before I heard a very familiar voice which made turn only to see my sponsor looking over at me.

"Hey Enzo, come over here" said my sponsor who was a male red Mustang and he was smiling at me. "I want to talk to you about something very important".

Cal: (as Mustang) Your blinker’s on.

Yes I got it!

 

"I'm coming just hold on a sec" I said as I signed one last autograph before driving over to my sponsor.

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN-13

The King: Was that really necessary?

Pixargirl: Yes!

 

"I'm here so what did you want to talk to me about?".

"Your race of course" said my sponsor as he gently nudged me which I returned joyfully. "I have gotta to admit that was one hell of race that I have just seen".

Cal: You know I don’t a four-way tie should be that good for the sponsor. It kind of seems like you come across as slow, like the fourth of first place in a weird way.

The King: Tex was fine with it but I get what ya mean.

 

"I agree with you on that one" I said as my fans began to listen to what I had to say. "It really was a tough race especially right at the end where I managed to gain a tie".

                                                            A Tie by Pixargirl
           

"Which means one thing" said my sponsor, eagerly and I knew what he was going to say. "You are still in a chance of winning the piston cup".

The King: What’s his sponsorship anyways?

Pixargirl: Eh, I donno. 

The King: You gotta be kiddin’? 

Pixargirl: Nope, in fact we never see Enzo’s sponsor again after this chapter. We don’t know what the company is, what they sell and Enzo never thinks about them once.

I’M A NICE GUY, RIGHT? – 13

 

"You may be right on that one" I said before I began to tell my fans what racing really means. "But there is a whole lot more to racing than just winning folks".

"Can you explain what that is?" asked my sponsor as he got confused with what I am saying. "I hear you say that a lot of times and I still don't understand it".

Pixargirl: You know that’s actually a good point. He’s been mostly speaking repetitive, but still vague morals.

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 12
HAND HOLDING- 15

 

"Well, winning isn't everything" I said before I began to explain it a bit more. "You see, winning is only a small part of racing but caring for others is more important".

HAND HOLDING- 16

Cal: Yeah, but you still need to win.

 

"Oh now I am starting to get it" said my sponsor as he realized what I was trying to say. "So you are saying that showing sportsmanship is more important than winning?".

HAND HOLDING-17 

The King: No, winning is still kinda important to the job and you should in general just be a good winner and not be jerk to cars whose job is to help you on-and-off-track.

Cal: …Did he seriously put a period after the question mark?

 

"That is exactly what I am saying" I said as I began to finish my little speech to my fans. "You can be anything you want but as long as you care for others".

HAND HOLDING- 18

Pixargirl: Sponsors want you to win. You make money by winning races. It’s encouraged that you don’t do anything shady or underhanded as you race because it’s a hollow victory morally and cheating in the illegal sense. If you can’t win or make it to the top of the race than you won’t gain anything.

 

My fans began cheering at my little speech and I bowed to them in appreciation before I once again began signing autographs with my fans who kept on coming back for more much to my happiness since I loved being around my fans.

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN- 14

Pixargirl: That advice was incredibly vague and honestly doesn’t tell them anything about why it’s important to race. Like is caring for others applying to the pit crew? Being nice and thankful to the fans that support you and buy your merchandise? Gain and maintain a relationship with your fellow racers despite competing against him.

 

I continued to sign autographs and take selfies with my fans 

The King: *serious voice at Pixargirl* Don’t you dare.

Pixargirl: Eh I’m over it. It’s the last time selfies will be mentioned in this story.

 

before I eventually began driving backwards into my trailer which was behind the tent so I can get set off to California in order to make sure that I can finish this season on a high note.

Cal: As oppose to a low note?

 

My fans continued to cheer me as I slowly drove backwards into my trailer and I smiled at my fans until I saw a familiar face in the crowd which turned out to be the young girl that I saw earlier when I was signing autographs.

"Hello there little one" I said as I drove over to the little girl who was purple Porsche. "What's your name?".

Pixargirl: A purple girl Porsche and Enzo’s red. Can you see where this is going?

 

"My name is Tracy sir" said the young purple Porsche as she shyly looked at me. "I am one of your biggest fans". 

"I get that a lot" I said as I gave a light-hearted chuckle before I continued to talk to her. "So what do you want to do when you grow up?".

"Well, I want to be a race-car" said Tracy which caught all of my other fan's attention. "I want to be just like you since you are the one I look up to as my idol".

The King: That’s kinda cute. Reminds me of Cal when he was a kid.

Pixargirl: But he’s your nephew… and your actors are a father and son… *now lost in thought* 

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN- 16

 

"I'm sure that you will be just like me kiddo" I said before I heard a angry voice coming from outside the tent. "Now I wonder who that could be". 

Pixargirl: That wasn’t me!

…Just saying.

 

"That's my dad and he hates me" said Tracy which shocked me since I didn't expect myself to hear that. "He hates me just because I dream of racing someday".

"Don't worry Tracy, I will speak to him" I said as I gave Tracy a comforting smile which made her smile back. "You keep following your dream".

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 18 

Cal: That’s… incredibly casual for someone who just got told by a kid that her father hates them.

Pixargirl: Lord here it comes.

 

Tracy continued to smile at me before we heard a very angry voice heading our way until we were soon confronted by a male red Porsche who started to angrily shout at me which made me roll my eyes since I don't like his attitude one bit.

Pixargirl: Yeah, it’s the attitude that’s the problem.

 

He soon turned to Tracy and he was shouting angrily at her before he suddenly slapped Tracy

Cal: And that’s when Enzo calls the police, right? 

Pixargirl: Nope. Just watch.

 

in clear view of my other fans who soon got in front of Tracy in order to protect her 

Pixargirl: Well so much for the Bystander Effect, the more people that are around, the less likely anyone is to help.

Cal: That shouldn’t make any sense!

 

from the very rude male red Porsche until I decided to intervene. 

"Sir, I will not tolerate a car who slaps a young girl like that" I said as I drove towards the angry male red Porsche. "So let me guess, you are Tracy's father?".

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 19

Cal: Who care if he’s her father! He still slapped a kid! 

The King: Tolerate? No tolerating something is Lightning’s behavior. Smacking a little kid is something that you should be pissed!

 

"That's right rookie and I intend to stop my daughter from racing" said the male red Porsche as he looked angrily at me. "I am the one who should be choosing her future".

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 20

Pixargirl: You know an interesting character can come out of this. Why does he feel like he should choose Tracy’s future? Does he come from a background of toxic masculinity? Does he want to make sure she’s financially stable and it turned him into an abusive prick? It’s not to condone his abuse but it makes him less of a one-dimensional asshole. 

                                                                                                                           

Your Lie in April, which I have… mixed feelings on, gave dimension to the abusive mother with her desire of wanting to make her son an amazing pianist had caused her to go overboard when he’s not playing exactly like the original composer in his performance that she hit with her cane to the point where HE BLED.

Your Lie in April Mom by Pixargirl

           The mother cries saying that she’s running out of time and wonders if he’ll be able to keep going without her. 

Your Lie in April mom 2 by Pixargirl
           

She’s still awful person and I’m not fond of the show trying to make me sympathize with her but she’s not a one-note abuser.

 

"Oh really because it sounds to me that you are stopping her from achieving her dream" I said as I looked at him in the eye. "Which is very wrong sir and you know that".

The King: Enzo this not something you should be PREACHING ABOUT!

 

"Shut up you stupid race-car and you are not allowed to get involved in my family's conversations" said the male red Porsche. "SO KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT!".

Pixargirl: Am I awful for agreeing with him on this?

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 21

 

"I will not tolerate that kind of tone sir and I am allowed to get involved in your conversations" I said as I managed to stay calm. "Especially after you slapped the poor girl". 

Pixargirl: Dude, voicing your disapproval of the guy’s abuse to his kid won’t make him stop. If anything, it might make it worse.

 

"Oh yeah? well she deserved it especially if she even dares to try and follow her dream of racing" said the male red Porsche. "She shouldn't be allowed to follow her passion".

Pixargirl: *laughs*

Cal: *confused* What are you laughing about!

Pixargirl: *laughing slows as she speaks* Just at how cartoonish-ly clichéd everything he’s saying now! BWAHAHAHAHA!

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 22

 

"Sir listen to me, I intend to adopt Tracy as my own unless you sort yourself out big time" I said as I gave the guy a stern look. "Let Tracy follow her dreams, ok?".

The King: (as Tracy’s dad) Okay.

Cal: (as Enzo) Really?

The King: (as Tracy’s dad) No you idiot!

Pixargirl: Tracy’s dad is much louder than that.

The King: I’m not straining my voice for that.

 

I didn't wait for an answer as I began to drive back over to my trailer where I soon began to slowly drive backwards into the trailer until I was inside the trailer itself and I gave Tracy a quick wink before the trailer door shut. 

Cal and The King: YOU’RE JUST GOING TO LEAVE HER LIKE THAT!

Pixargirl: Yes, he’s kind of an idiot that way. Because of that I’m awarding him ten points. 

I’M A NICE GUY, RIGHT? – 23

Pixargirl: Boys let’s go over what Enzo should’ve done.

Cal: Well for one he could’ve called the police saying that a father just smacked his child.

Pixargirl There’s also the fact that there were several witnesses of Tracy’s assault with Enzo’s fans being the ones to protect the kid. The “selfies” that Enzo took with them also helps with providing proof if they took photos or even video of the kid before and after her dad hitting her. 

The King: Hate to say it but Enzo wouldn’t be able to fight back due to the media storm that would fall out. The bastard father might spin it to make him the victim and Enzo the bad guy.

Pixargirl: This might sound like a weird and probably illegal suggestion but maybe Enzo also should’ve told his fans to keep an eye her father. They were nice enough to protect her after that attack so… yeah it’d be stalking but it’d be stalking for good.

Cal: I don’t think that’s really a good idea. I’m just saying that she’s not really there responsibility and he’d probably get into some legal trouble as well.

The King: Pix did you even listen to yourself?

Pixargirl: …In hindsight that was a very stupid idea.

 

Mark started his engines and we were finally off to California for the tie-breaker race and I was very determined to put on a good show for both my fans and for the little girl Tracy who I knew was going to have a tough time with her father.

ENZO THE STATUE- 14

Pixargirl: Which you will do nothing about and doesn’t even think about Tracy for THIRTY CHAPTERS!

Cal and The King: WHAT? 

Pixargirl: Yeah Enzo doesn’t even mention Tracy until chapter thirty-six and she won’t even appear until chapter forty-one. He just forgets as the rest of the story plays. We’re on chapter six so he’s spends more than half the fic forgetting that she exist.

Cal: Maybe he had a lot of stuff going on. 

Pixargirl: Not really…

Anyways, you guys are free to go and I might call one or both of you again but I suggest you go now, my tranquilizer is supposed to wear off soon. 

Cal: Okay...

*Cal and The King look confused before leaving*


Pixargirl: Next chapters are going to just be the regular form of dumb and we finally get to Radiator Springs.

Now if you'll excuse me, I’m going to make a call to a friend with a Tracy OC that actually kicks ass and does stuff!

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COUNTS:

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN- 16 (10)
ENZO THE STATUE- 14 (9)
DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 12 (6)
I’M A NICE GUY, RIGHT? – 23 (15)
THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 22 (12)
HAND HOLDING- 18 (11)

Sporking: Two friends, one cup Ch. 4-6
I know sporkers on Das Sporking have characters from a canon also take part in the sporking of story so I decided to test some waters. One for me to seem like I'm part of something, and two because I felt like I need something or someone to bounce off of. I went with a character who was in the chapters of the spork, The King, and Cal Weathers because... I like Cal.

The I was originally going to say at the end of the sporking as to why I was giggling when I say The King's real name, Strip Weathers. His name makes me think that it's a porn star's name. Yes, I am very immature.

There was another joke I was gonna add but I thought it might be political:

"I mean, Mr. Weathers, and the race would’ve probably be kind of a stalemate or something as to who would be least controversial in getting the cup and Dinoco."

What would've followed the sentence would've been "It's like the 2016 U.S. election." While I think it woud've been funny I feel like it'd be too political or something or somehow I'd be pissing someone off. Even though we all know who was worse.

I don't like Enzo so I'm using the other characters to tell me to calm to juxtapose my annoyance with Enzo.
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Um... yeah that sounds like an absolute mess of a character morality.

...Kind of like me.



For people who read the books, what are your thoughts?

Pixargirl: Welcome back babes! Let’s get this show on the road. No pun intended… seriously.

WARNING: CHAPTER 6 INCLUDES PHYSICAL AND EMOTIONAL ABUSE OF A CHILD AND NEGLECT!

 

Chapter 4: The Advice

Hello Everyone. Here is chapter 4 and I hope that you will like it. :) 

Pixargirl: Nope it’s just dull. However I won’t be at this alone.

YO CAL, STRIP! WEATHERS BOYS GET OVER HERE!

*two racecars in light blue paint drive over, confused at being yelled but being otherwise unfazed by the human girl* 

Let me introduce you to my sporking partners for these chapters. New to the series is number 42, Cal Weathers, replacement for his uncle, Strip “The King” Weathers, and an absolute cinnamon roll.

CalWeathers by Pixargirl

Cal: Hey I- I’m sorry what? 

Pixargirl: And of course a character who was in the first movie and this scene and actually appears in this chapter, Strip “The King” *snorts immaturely* Weathers!

The king by Pixargirl

The King: Uh, kid, what were you laughin’ at?

Pixargirl: Nothing! Nothing… Let’s get to the sporking, sirs.

 

I still had tears forming in my eyes before I heard a voice coming from behind me and it was the King himself who I was happy to see although he had a worried expression on his face which I noticed as I quickly tried to regain control of myself.

The King: You said this was from the Dinoco 400 tie, right? I don’t remember anyone cryin’ afterwards.

Pixargirl: Oops! Keyboarded you two to not freak out about human me, but forgot to keyboard you guys info on Enzo from the story.

Cal: That does answer-

*keyboards the info onto them*

 

He patted me on the hood and I knew that he felt sorry for me which comforted me a little before I quickly began to wipe away the tears although I wasn't bothered if anyone else had seen me crying since I also wasn't bothered by what they were saying.

The King: Then why’d you put yourself together when… I saw… you? This is weird.

Pixargirl: Yeah I’m sorry.

 

"Hey mister the King" I said as I continued to wipe away my tears. "I'm sorry that you had to see me like this".

"It's ok buddy" said the King, comfortingly. "Do you care to explain to me about what made you upset?".

Cal: What happened to him? A family member died? A serious injury?

Pixargirl: No. Just him whining.

 

"Well, it's my friend Lightning" I admitted. "I was crying because he was acting very arrogant and very selfish which really worries me".

Cal: Lightning was really that bad, huh?

Pixargirl and The King: Yep. 

Pixargirl: I hated him.

 

"I understand" said the King, nodding his head in agreement. "Don't worry, I will have a word with him about and I hope he listens".

I’M A NICE GUY, RIGHT? – 11

Pixargirl: Putting three points down because if it’s bothering you that much, than you need to talk to him. Don’t let other people fix your problems. Quit fishing for sympathy!

 

"Thanks mister the King" I said, happily. "I really do appreciate what you're doing for me".

The King: I was goin’ to do that on my own… I didn’t really need to be told that.

Pixargirl: Yeah well in OC insertion fics, canon characters have no agency and have to be told by the OC to do a thing they did in canon.

 

"No problem buddy" said the King as he drove away. "I'll see you later". 

I waved good-bye to him before I turned my attention to Lightning who I hoped would take this moment as a lesson that arrogance and selfishness will only get you so far while showing sportsmanship and caring for others is more important.

Cal: Uh what lesson? Nothing really happened for him to learn anything.

HAND HOLDING - 8

 

Suddenly I saw Chick Hicks and his pit crew heading towards me and Lightning which I knew that it can't be good since Chick Hicks loves to gloat about winning the piston cup as well as become the new face of Dinoco when the King retires.

Pixargirl: Good observation, never would’ve figure that out. 

HAND HOLDING - 9

 

I just knew that Lightning would become a carbon-copy of Chick Hicks if he kept on being arrogant and selfish which is what he was currently doing although I really hoped that he would avoid becoming another Chick Hicks.

Cal: Okay has Lightning shown any sign of crashin’ cars?

The King: No, he was just more of idiot who needed good smack of reality before he gets himself kill.

Pixargirl: Yeah like, while I don’t think Lightning would resort to smashing and crashing cars like Chick does, he does have that dangerous and reckless ego, both are obsessed with winning and being the best.

Lightning could’ve ended up like Chick but it’s more based around the circumstances. The race in Los Angeles would’ve been different had Lightning not ended up in Radiator Springs. Lightning wouldn’t have a pit crew still, Chick would’ve still pulled that crash with you Stri- *snort, before pulling herself together* I mean, Mr. Weathers, and the race would’ve probably be kind of a stalemate or something as to who would be least controversial in getting the cup and Dinoco.

HAND HOLDING - 10

 

"McQueen, seriously, that was some pretty darn nice racing out there...BY ME!" shouted Chick Hicks

Pixargirl: I forgot how much Chick shouts at random.

 

 which caught Lightning's attention. "Welcome to the Chick Era, baby!".

"That's really funny Chick" I said, sarcastically since I didn't find it very funny at all. "Besides, racing is suppose to be about showing sportsmanship not arrogance".

Cal: Yeah but you also kinda have to win. You can get payback on them after the race.

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 11


"Whatever and you do want to know something else?" asked Chick Hicks, eagerly while I just rolled my eyes. "The Piston Cup? It's mine, dude, it's mine".

"Hahaha" I laughed, sarcastically knowing that chick was too blinded by his obsession with the piston cup to notice. "Actually the piston cup won't be yours Chick even if you do win it".

The King: Yeah it kinda is legally his.

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 12

Cal: Wow… and I thought was bad at comebacks.

Pixargirl: You still are. But you’re an absolute cinnamon roll because of it.

Cal: What?

 

"Hey fellas, how do you think I'll look in Dinoco Blue?" asked Chick as he ignored me before laughing. " DINOCO BLUE! Ahahaha!".

The King: Yeah I could hear all way.

Pixargirl: So they let you and Cal keep the trademarked color even after you retired?

 

"In your dreams, Thunder" said Lightning before he looked at me as he whispered something. "He has no idea what that means".

HAND HOLDING - 11
THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS! - 13

Pixargirl: …Shoot me with an arrow.

 

"Yeah, well..."Thunder"?" asked Chick Hicks, confused as I tried to hide a snicker. " What's he talking about, "Thunder"?".

"Oh, you know" said Lightning as a smirk appeared on his face. "Because 'Thunder' always comes after Lightning! Ka-chow!".

Pixargirl: Oh sure, you’re close enough to Lightning and Chick to hear their little dick-measuring contest, but not to hear Chick’s confusion with what the hell Lightning’s talking about. BE CONSISTENT WITH WHAT ENZO’S HEARING!

 

I watched Lightning do some poses before I drove off to meet with some of my fans just to pass the time

Cal: (as Enzo) Eh, talking to talking to my friend about his attitude can wait. I have to also indulge in my fame.

Pixargirl: Good comeback Cal! *smirks to self*

ENZO THE STATUE - 8

 

 and I had a great time with them especially with all of the selfies that they took of me standing with them and I bet it was a dream come true for them.

Pixargirl: SELFIES WERE NOT A THING IN 2005! 

The King: You know, we’re all kinda aware of the fans being excited and happy to see us and that’s great, it really is. I just think we should be a little more relaxed when it comes it.

Pixargirl: Problem with first-person really, While it can be true, the way Enzo’s saying it sounds really… self indulgent or egotistical in a way.

 

The little ones came to have their autographs signed and I signed their autographs much to their joy since I love kids especially the young ones who have this cute little smile that can you love them from the moment that you see them.

Cal: That’s actually really nice. These kids look up to him and he’s being really respectful and cool about them. It kind of reminds me of when I went to my first race.

The King: I remember that. Your aunt Lynda had to hold you back at the pits so you wouldn’t get swept up by the first lap.

Cal: And after the race I asked you for an autograph, and you said…

The King and Cal: You already got one from the permission slip.

 

I had finished signing their autographs and I watched as the security began to take my fans away again much to my sadness since I love hanging out with them

Cal: You could just say that they’re with you or somethin’.

Pixargirl: How did kids even get to this place by themselves? Let alone through security.

 

 but two voices had caught my attention and I turned only to see the two familiar twin female cars who were standing in front of Lightning.

Pixargirl: Familiar? When did you-?

We jumped onto the race car that was on top of the pile and we literally flew through the air where I managed to catch a glimpse of Lightning sticking out his tongue before he winked and pointed his front-right tire at what I guessed was his fans.

Pixargirl: Oh… You know, I know he didn’t know their names but defining features might’ve been nice to know that he was pointing to two Mazda Miatas in red and adorn with Lightning McQueen stickers.

 

"I'm Mia" said one of the twin female cars.

"I'm Tia" said the other before they began to talk at the same time. "We're like your biggest fans! Ka-chow".

"I love being me" said Lightning as he smiled at them before security came once again.

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Pixargirl: …And you forgot to add they were flashing their headlights at him along with how he was saying that.

Cal: They flashed their headlights and he was enjoying it? Man, Lightning was a perve back in the day.

Pixargirl: Yeah it’s basically the human equivalent of them showing off their tits.

Flashing boobs by Pixargirl

Anime Girl Flashing Fanservice by Pixargirl

Anime girl boob fanservice by Pixargirl

Cal: *confused* Umm… okay. 

The King: Huh? 

Pixargirl: HUMANS! Also just felt the need to illustrate the point more thoroughly.

 

"Okay, girls" said one security car as he took them away. "That's it". 

"We love you, Lightning" said Mia and Tia as they were taken away.

McQueen chuckled before he blew a kiss at them as I slowly drove over to him and

Pixargirl: You're not going to call him out are you? Yeah, ogling at a lady's breast is okay if they lady or ladies in this case allow you to, but considering that Enzo will speak out to Lightning about how he was talking Sally in a later chapter I think this would be something in character for him to tell Lightning to be respectful.

I’M A NICE GUY, RIGHT? – 12


I soon ended up beside him when the King appeared before us which made me smile knowing that he was going to have a word with Lightning about his crazy stunt. 

ENZO THE STATUE- 10

The King: I was still goin’ to talk to the kid. I wasn't doin’ it for you.

Pixargirl: You see what mean? Enzo kept going on and on about “having a word” with Lightning that instead has everyone else fixes his problems.

 

I gave Lightning a gently nudge to let him know that the King was here to speak with him and Lightning straightened himself up knowing that he was about to talk to a veteran racer that knows what is like to be on the track.

Pixargirl: Uh… Enzo, you’ve been racing in the circuit longer than Lightning. Shouldn't you already know what it's like?

 

"Hey, buddy" said the King. "You're one gutsy racer". 

"Oh, hey, Mr. The King" said Lightning before he turned to me. "Please don't tell me that you have spoken to him already".

Pixargirl: SEE! This seems to imply Enzo does this regularly!

 

"You got more talent in one lug nut than a lot of cars has got in their whole body" said the King. "You really do".

The King: That's repetitive.

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 7 
THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 14

 

 

"Really? Oh, that" said Lightning, happily before he was suddenly cut off and rather rudely I must say. 

Cal: Yeah that's kinda to be expected from him.

 

"But you're stupid" said the King which shocked Lightning and it shocked me too since I didn't think the King would go THAT far.

Pixargirl: Good lord sometimes you can't afford politeness.

The King: It’s called honesty. I ain't gonna sugarcoat someone messin’ around and playing daredevil on the track.

 

"Excuse me?" asked Lightning, shocked.

"This ain't a one-man deal, kid" said the King. "You need to wise up and get yourself a good crew chief and a good team. You ain't gonna win unless you got good folks behind you and you let them do their job, like they should. Like I tell the boys at the shop".

"A good team" said Lightning as he looked over at the Dinoco performers. "Yeah".

Cal: Performers? You mean the pit crew and crew chief? Yeah there's also the helicopter and the Dinoco girls but the good team that-

Pixargirl: No. That's just Enzo being an idiot.

 Dinoco by Pixargirl
 

I closed my eyes in annoyance knowing that Lightning wasn't paying attention to what the King was trying to say to him and it was some good piece of advice that could very well save Lightning's whole career from his arrogance and selfishness. 

The King: …In hindsight I should've known he wasn't listening.

Pixargirl: You didn't know he went to La La Land? Granted you were still talking after his fantasy…

 

Lightning kept on day-dreaming about Dinoco and I looked at the King which he responded by looking at me before I silently told him that Lightning wasn't listening to him and he only needed to look at Lightning once to know that I was right.

Pixargirl: Yeah Strip *snorts* was talking to a brick wall at this point.

Lightning in Daydream land by Pixargirl

 

Chapter 5: The Sponsors part 1

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Minutes had begun to fly past but for me it felt like an eternity as I looked at Lightning who had a dreamy expression on his face which gave the only hint I needed to know that he was still day-dreaming about Dinoco. 

Pixargirl: In movie time it was only forty one seconds. But it seemed like Mr. Weathers was talking for longer than that so…

 

I looked at the King and I apologised to him knowing that the King probably wasn't feeling very happy about being ignored by a rookie but he gave a comforting smile to let me that he forgives me which makes me sigh in relief.

The King: You didn’t do anything wrong for me to forgive you.

The King knew that he had to get Lightning to pay attention 

Pixargirl: Why don’t you do it? I know violence isn’t the solution, yatta, yatta, yatta, but I think if your friend is being rude to someone than sometime you have get back to reality with a little pain.

Smack To The Head by Pixargirl


and so he had finally decided to end his advice in order to snap Lightning out of his day-dreaming state so he can start paying attention to what he had to say.

Cal: You seriously didn’t know he was daydreaming?

The King: Well I’m sorry if I couldn’t read the kid’s mind. Tried to help him, got ignored end of story.

 

"If you figure that out" said the King as he ended his advice to Lightning. "You just gonna be OK".

"Oh, yeah, that" said Lightning as he finally snapped out of his day-dreaming state. "That is spectacular advice. Thank you, Mr. The King".

"I really hope that you were listening" said the King, seriously. "Because your friend told me that he is worried about the way that you are acting, just be careful".

Pixargirl: HE DIDN’T DO IT FOR ENZO!

The King: Well there goes my hearin’.

Pixargirl: SHUT UP CAL! NOBODY ASKED FOR YOUR OPINION!

Cal: I-I didn’t even do anything.

Pixargirl: Sorry Cal-Cal. *looks at phone to check the time*

 

Lightning was stunned by what he was hearing

Pixargirl: Why? Lightning literally said this last chapter when Mr Weath- I mean Strip *snorts* came to talk to him:

"Please don't tell me that you have spoken to him already".
So Lightning already figured that Enzo had Strip *snort* go and talk to him.

 

 and he quickly looked at me with a worried expression but I mouthed to him that we will have a talk about that later although I could tell that he really wanted to know right now. 

All three: Then why don’t you?

We suddenly got excited as the announcer began to announce the result of the race that we had all been waiting for and I knew that Lightning was the most excited since he thought that he had won the piston cup. 

"Ladies and gentle-cars" said the announcer. "For the first in piston cup history".

Pixargirl: (as an announcer) We have Gary Stu as racer! 

Cal: Wouldn’t an ellipsis be necessary for that part?

 

"A rookie had won the piston cup" said Lightning before he drove onto the podium. "YES!".

"We have a four-way tie" said the announcer which caused everyone to begin cheering.

ENZO THE STATUE- 12

Cal: Uh… okay the three-way was an unexpected, but plausible but the four way feels less so… 

Pixargirl: …I really wish I knew auto racing because I want to give a math mathematic possibility of how unlikely this would happen.

 

I was surprised that it was a four-way tie since I personally thought that I won the race although I really wanted to hear that the King had won the race especially when it's his last race of his entire career but I guess it wasn't meant to be.

The King: Thanks for the reminder. 

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 8
HAND HOLDING- 12

 

The King and I along with Chick Hicks joined Lightning on the podium where I saw him standing there with a stunned expression on his face since he really did thought that he had become the first rookie to have won the piston cup. 

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 9
HAND HOLDING- 13

Pixargirl: GAH! We get it!

 

"Hey, McQueen, that must be really embarrassing" mocked Chick hicks. "But I wouldn't worry about it... because I didn't do it! HA-HA-HA!".

"Chick would you please just shut up for once" I said as I got annoyed with his arrogance. "You really can be annoying sometimes".

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 10

 

"Piston cup officials have determined that a tie-breaker race" said the announcer. "Between the three leaders will be held in California in one week".

I was surprised that one week was all that it seemed to take to get to California 

The King: It really doesn’t.

Pixargirl: Not unless you want to waste time and go through twenty different stops.

 

 but I remained sceptical since anything could happen during that one week and I began to prepare myself for any trouble that might be coming my way.

Pixargirl: QUIT HOLDING MY HAND!

HAND HOLDING- 14

Cal: Hey, hey! Calm down.

Pixargirl: Okay fine! *looks up stuff on her phone*

 

Lightning quickly looked at me and he was as surprised as I was after I had heard the announcement but I shrugged in response since I had no idea what was going to happen during that one week of travelling but I quickly mouthed to Lightning to be patient and he seemed to take it in stride.

"Well thank you, thanks to all of ya out there, thank you" said Chick before he turned to Lightning. "Hey rook, first one to California gets Dinoco all to himself".

Cal: Well thank the Manufacturer I got it.

Pixargirl: Surprise no one accused you of nepotism with the whole, “taking on the sponsorship that my immediate uncle had” thing.

Cal: Oh there were, that’s why I seem to be the butt of everyone’s jokes.

Pixargirl: Seem to be?

 

"So you say Chick but I got a feeling that Lightning is going to take that as a challenge" I said. "Also Chick, you should stop being selfish while you still have the chance".

The King: Who the hell says that upfront like that?

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 15

The King: And kid, I’ve known him for years, tried to tell him to quit bein’ a jackass before, and it got me crashed to the field.

 

I knew that he would ignore me and I guessed correctly when I heard him talking to somebody else in the crowd before we finally got off the podium and to our trucks in order to get going to California as soon as possible.

ENZO THE STATUE- 13

Cal: Did they just teleport into the lot?

 

Lightning and I silently drove back to our respective trucks with Chick's 'challenge' still deep in our minds since this could be our chance at payback or it could simply be a trick just so he can make the fools out of us.

Pixargirl: Oh for the love of-! Are you implying that Chick sent the delinquent road hazards to get Lightning lost. That was more of a happy accident of them finding an extremely tired Mack, who was pulling a famous dude, and screw around with him. They didn’t seem to have intended on Lightning getting lost.

 

"First one to California gets Dinoco all to himself" muttered Lightning. "Oh we'll see who gets there first, Chick".

"Take it easy Lightning since it could all be a trick" I said. "You just never know what someone like Chick is up to".

The King: What trick?

 

"I know Enzo but Chick really gets on my nerves" said Lightning. "Perhaps this is my big opportunity to get my pay...Huh?".

Cal: Check?

 

Lightning had suddenly stopped and I wondered why he stopped but I quickly noticed that his truck was gone but so was mine although I had a strange feeling that my truck has gone to somewhere that I probably know already.

Pixargirl: *looks at her phone bored before perking up* Oh my gosh!

Cal: What? 

Pixargirl: Your voice actor tried to do country music and OH SWEET MOTHER OF NATY WHAT IS THAT HAIR!

 

Soon enough Lightning's truck and my truck had finally appeared from seemingly nowhere and they had smiles on their faces as they gave us their congratulations

Pixargirl: BEHOLD! The disappearing-reappearing trucks!

 

on the race which I took in stride while Lightning didn't.

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN- 7

Cal: Of course he did.

 

"Hey kid" said Lightning's truck. "Congrats on the tie".

"I don't want to talk about it" said Lightning. "Let's go Mack saddle up,

Pixargirl: It’s lines like this from Lightning that make me remember that Owen Wilson is from Texas.

 

 what'd you do with my trailer?".

The King: Had it sent to the wash. Somethin’ about Stu-germs?

 

"I parked it at your Sponsor's tent" said Mack before he turned to me. "Hey Enzo, congrats on the tie".

Pixargirl: (as Mack) I’m obligated to repeating the same thing to both you and Lightning.

 

"Thanks Mack, I really appreciate it" I said as I smiled at gratefully at Mack. "So, you parked Lightning's trailer at his sponsor's tent, I see".

Cal: He just said that. 

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 11

 

"What?" asked Lightning, shocked. "You can't be serious".

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 17

Pixargirl: Seriously though, that doesn’t flow after Enzo just spoke.

 

"You gotta make your personal appearance" said Mack. "Also Enzo is going to make his personal appearance too, right Enzo?".

The King: …Do you really need reassurance for someone who isn’t your client?

 

"That's right Mack" I said before I noticed my truck. "Hey Mark, I guess you heard that there is going to be a four-way tie-breaker race in California".

"Yes I did boss" said Mark as he smiled at me. "I gotta say that was one hell of a race".

Pixargirl: Yeah keep saying that I’m sure someone gonna believe it eventually.

 

I nodded in agreement before we slowly began driving over to my sponsor's tent while we heard Lightning begging Mack not to allow to make a personal appearance with his sponsors which I rolled my eyes at how childish that Lightning was being.

Mark and I finally got to my sponsor's tent where I took a chance to peak in only to see many of my fans there waiting for me which made me smile knowing that I loved being with my fans since they are the main reason why I love racing.

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN- 8 

Cal: Is that really necessary? 

Pixargirl: Yes!

Cal: Well I’m just sayin’ it’s a genuinely nic-

Pixargirl: I’m just happy I don’t have to see Lightning’s sponsor speaking scene. I hated him there and how he was acting and how much of a dick he was so move on to the next chapter!
           



Chapter 6: The Sponsors part 2

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Pixargirl: Ugh… Here we go.

Cal: Pix, I think you may be a little harsh the story and this kid. Yeah he’s bland and dull as a rock but he’s at least nice.

Pixargirl: Just wait…

 

Mark must have noticed that I was smiling since he gave me a gentle nudge and I turned to him only to see that he was also smiling and he told me it was time to make my appearance while he gets hooked up to the trailer.

I watched Mark go before I eventually make myself known by driving slowly into the tent and my fans as well as my sponsors saw before they went wild with happiness at the fact that I was right there in front of them. before their very eyes.

             

Entrance by Pixargirl


           

A young girl wanted me to sign her autograph and I signed it with a smile on my face since I loved making my younger fans happy to meet their hero which in this case was me and I loved being around my fans especially the younger ones.

The King: None of y’all gonna say anything!

Pixargirl: No problem. 

Cal: Done.

 

"You're awesome Enzo!" shouted a male elderly van as he shook tires with me. "I am your biggest fan!".

"Thanks for the compliment" I said as I smiled at the male elderly van. "Do you want me to sign your autograph too?".

Pixargirl: (as random fan) No I want you to kiss my bumper!

 

"Yes please!" shouted the male elderly van, happily. "That would be such a honour!".

Cal: A “u” in “honor?” You said the author is British right?

Pixargirl: Yeah. Lovely people really.

Cal: Never said they weren’t…

 

I smiled as I began signing his autograph and I had just finished signing it when a young boy wanted his autograph signed too much to my happiness since I loved signing autographs since it allows me to connect and interact with my fans.

All of my fans had gathered around me since they too wanted me to sign their autographs and take selfies with them which I gladly accepted

Pixargirl: 

The King: What was that all about?

Pixargirl: I’m not quite angry to explode yet, but still annoyed that I want explode so that’s my substitute. Also this:

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN-12 


before I heard a very familiar voice which made turn only to see my sponsor looking over at me.

"Hey Enzo, come over here" said my sponsor who was a male red Mustang and he was smiling at me. "I want to talk to you about something very important".

Cal: (as Mustang) Your blinker’s on.

Yes I got it!

 

"I'm coming just hold on a sec" I said as I signed one last autograph before driving over to my sponsor.

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN-13

The King: Was that really necessary?

Pixargirl: Yes!

 

"I'm here so what did you want to talk to me about?".

"Your race of course" said my sponsor as he gently nudged me which I returned joyfully. "I have gotta to admit that was one hell of race that I have just seen".

Cal: You know I don’t a four-way tie should be that good for the sponsor. It kind of seems like you come across as slow, like the fourth of first place in a weird way.

The King: Tex was fine with it but I get what ya mean.

 

"I agree with you on that one" I said as my fans began to listen to what I had to say. "It really was a tough race especially right at the end where I managed to gain a tie".

                                                            A Tie by Pixargirl
           

"Which means one thing" said my sponsor, eagerly and I knew what he was going to say. "You are still in a chance of winning the piston cup".

The King: What’s his sponsorship anyways?

Pixargirl: Eh, I donno. 

The King: You gotta be kiddin’? 

Pixargirl: Nope, in fact we never see Enzo’s sponsor again after this chapter. We don’t know what the company is, what they sell and Enzo never thinks about them once.

I’M A NICE GUY, RIGHT? – 13

 

"You may be right on that one" I said before I began to tell my fans what racing really means. "But there is a whole lot more to racing than just winning folks".

"Can you explain what that is?" asked my sponsor as he got confused with what I am saying. "I hear you say that a lot of times and I still don't understand it".

Pixargirl: You know that’s actually a good point. He’s been mostly speaking repetitive, but still vague morals.

DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 12
HAND HOLDING- 15

 

"Well, winning isn't everything" I said before I began to explain it a bit more. "You see, winning is only a small part of racing but caring for others is more important".

HAND HOLDING- 16

Cal: Yeah, but you still need to win.

 

"Oh now I am starting to get it" said my sponsor as he realized what I was trying to say. "So you are saying that showing sportsmanship is more important than winning?".

HAND HOLDING-17 

The King: No, winning is still kinda important to the job and you should in general just be a good winner and not be jerk to cars whose job is to help you on-and-off-track.

Cal: …Did he seriously put a period after the question mark?

 

"That is exactly what I am saying" I said as I began to finish my little speech to my fans. "You can be anything you want but as long as you care for others".

HAND HOLDING- 18

Pixargirl: Sponsors want you to win. You make money by winning races. It’s encouraged that you don’t do anything shady or underhanded as you race because it’s a hollow victory morally and cheating in the illegal sense. If you can’t win or make it to the top of the race than you won’t gain anything.

 

My fans began cheering at my little speech and I bowed to them in appreciation before I once again began signing autographs with my fans who kept on coming back for more much to my happiness since I loved being around my fans.

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN- 14

Pixargirl: That advice was incredibly vague and honestly doesn’t tell them anything about why it’s important to race. Like is caring for others applying to the pit crew? Being nice and thankful to the fans that support you and buy your merchandise? Gain and maintain a relationship with your fellow racers despite competing against him.

 

I continued to sign autographs and take selfies with my fans 

The King: *serious voice at Pixargirl* Don’t you dare.

Pixargirl: Eh I’m over it. It’s the last time selfies will be mentioned in this story.

 

before I eventually began driving backwards into my trailer which was behind the tent so I can get set off to California in order to make sure that I can finish this season on a high note.

Cal: As oppose to a low note?

 

My fans continued to cheer me as I slowly drove backwards into my trailer and I smiled at my fans until I saw a familiar face in the crowd which turned out to be the young girl that I saw earlier when I was signing autographs.

"Hello there little one" I said as I drove over to the little girl who was purple Porsche. "What's your name?".

Pixargirl: A purple girl Porsche and Enzo’s red. Can you see where this is going?

 

"My name is Tracy sir" said the young purple Porsche as she shyly looked at me. "I am one of your biggest fans". 

"I get that a lot" I said as I gave a light-hearted chuckle before I continued to talk to her. "So what do you want to do when you grow up?".

"Well, I want to be a race-car" said Tracy which caught all of my other fan's attention. "I want to be just like you since you are the one I look up to as my idol".

The King: That’s kinda cute. Reminds me of Cal when he was a kid.

Pixargirl: But he’s your nephew… and your actors are a father and son… *now lost in thought* 

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN- 16

 

"I'm sure that you will be just like me kiddo" I said before I heard a angry voice coming from outside the tent. "Now I wonder who that could be". 

Pixargirl: That wasn’t me!

…Just saying.

 

"That's my dad and he hates me" said Tracy which shocked me since I didn't expect myself to hear that. "He hates me just because I dream of racing someday".

"Don't worry Tracy, I will speak to him" I said as I gave Tracy a comforting smile which made her smile back. "You keep following your dream".

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 18 

Cal: That’s… incredibly casual for someone who just got told by a kid that her father hates them.

Pixargirl: Lord here it comes.

 

Tracy continued to smile at me before we heard a very angry voice heading our way until we were soon confronted by a male red Porsche who started to angrily shout at me which made me roll my eyes since I don't like his attitude one bit.

Pixargirl: Yeah, it’s the attitude that’s the problem.

 

He soon turned to Tracy and he was shouting angrily at her before he suddenly slapped Tracy

Cal: And that’s when Enzo calls the police, right? 

Pixargirl: Nope. Just watch.

 

in clear view of my other fans who soon got in front of Tracy in order to protect her 

Pixargirl: Well so much for the Bystander Effect, the more people that are around, the less likely anyone is to help.

Cal: That shouldn’t make any sense!

 

from the very rude male red Porsche until I decided to intervene. 

"Sir, I will not tolerate a car who slaps a young girl like that" I said as I drove towards the angry male red Porsche. "So let me guess, you are Tracy's father?".

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 19

Cal: Who care if he’s her father! He still slapped a kid! 

The King: Tolerate? No tolerating something is Lightning’s behavior. Smacking a little kid is something that you should be pissed!

 

"That's right rookie and I intend to stop my daughter from racing" said the male red Porsche as he looked angrily at me. "I am the one who should be choosing her future".

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 20

Pixargirl: You know an interesting character can come out of this. Why does he feel like he should choose Tracy’s future? Does he come from a background of toxic masculinity? Does he want to make sure she’s financially stable and it turned him into an abusive prick? It’s not to condone his abuse but it makes him less of a one-dimensional asshole. 

                                                                                                                           

Your Lie in April, which I have… mixed feelings on, gave dimension to the abusive mother with her desire of wanting to make her son an amazing pianist had caused her to go overboard when he’s not playing exactly like the original composer in his performance that she hit with her cane to the point where HE BLED.

Your Lie in April Mom by Pixargirl

           The mother cries saying that she’s running out of time and wonders if he’ll be able to keep going without her. 

Your Lie in April mom 2 by Pixargirl
           

She’s still awful person and I’m not fond of the show trying to make me sympathize with her but she’s not a one-note abuser.

 

"Oh really because it sounds to me that you are stopping her from achieving her dream" I said as I looked at him in the eye. "Which is very wrong sir and you know that".

The King: Enzo this not something you should be PREACHING ABOUT!

 

"Shut up you stupid race-car and you are not allowed to get involved in my family's conversations" said the male red Porsche. "SO KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT!".

Pixargirl: Am I awful for agreeing with him on this?

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 21

 

"I will not tolerate that kind of tone sir and I am allowed to get involved in your conversations" I said as I managed to stay calm. "Especially after you slapped the poor girl". 

Pixargirl: Dude, voicing your disapproval of the guy’s abuse to his kid won’t make him stop. If anything, it might make it worse.

 

"Oh yeah? well she deserved it especially if she even dares to try and follow her dream of racing" said the male red Porsche. "She shouldn't be allowed to follow her passion".

Pixargirl: *laughs*

Cal: *confused* What are you laughing about!

Pixargirl: *laughing slows as she speaks* Just at how cartoonish-ly clichéd everything he’s saying now! BWAHAHAHAHA!

THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 22

 

"Sir listen to me, I intend to adopt Tracy as my own unless you sort yourself out big time" I said as I gave the guy a stern look. "Let Tracy follow her dreams, ok?".

The King: (as Tracy’s dad) Okay.

Cal: (as Enzo) Really?

The King: (as Tracy’s dad) No you idiot!

Pixargirl: Tracy’s dad is much louder than that.

The King: I’m not straining my voice for that.

 

I didn't wait for an answer as I began to drive back over to my trailer where I soon began to slowly drive backwards into the trailer until I was inside the trailer itself and I gave Tracy a quick wink before the trailer door shut. 

Cal and The King: YOU’RE JUST GOING TO LEAVE HER LIKE THAT!

Pixargirl: Yes, he’s kind of an idiot that way. Because of that I’m awarding him ten points. 

I’M A NICE GUY, RIGHT? – 23

Pixargirl: Boys let’s go over what Enzo should’ve done.

Cal: Well for one he could’ve called the police saying that a father just smacked his child.

Pixargirl There’s also the fact that there were several witnesses of Tracy’s assault with Enzo’s fans being the ones to protect the kid. The “selfies” that Enzo took with them also helps with providing proof if they took photos or even video of the kid before and after her dad hitting her. 

The King: Hate to say it but Enzo wouldn’t be able to fight back due to the media storm that would fall out. The bastard father might spin it to make him the victim and Enzo the bad guy.

Pixargirl: This might sound like a weird and probably illegal suggestion but maybe Enzo also should’ve told his fans to keep an eye her father. They were nice enough to protect her after that attack so… yeah it’d be stalking but it’d be stalking for good.

Cal: I don’t think that’s really a good idea. I’m just saying that she’s not really there responsibility and he’d probably get into some legal trouble as well.

The King: Pix did you even listen to yourself?

Pixargirl: …In hindsight that was a very stupid idea.

 

Mark started his engines and we were finally off to California for the tie-breaker race and I was very determined to put on a good show for both my fans and for the little girl Tracy who I knew was going to have a tough time with her father.

ENZO THE STATUE- 14

Pixargirl: Which you will do nothing about and doesn’t even think about Tracy for THIRTY CHAPTERS!

Cal and The King: WHAT? 

Pixargirl: Yeah Enzo doesn’t even mention Tracy until chapter thirty-six and she won’t even appear until chapter forty-one. He just forgets as the rest of the story plays. We’re on chapter six so he’s spends more than half the fic forgetting that she exist.

Cal: Maybe he had a lot of stuff going on. 

Pixargirl: Not really…

Anyways, you guys are free to go and I might call one or both of you again but I suggest you go now, my tranquilizer is supposed to wear off soon. 

Cal: Okay...

*Cal and The King look confused before leaving*


Pixargirl: Next chapters are going to just be the regular form of dumb and we finally get to Radiator Springs.

Now if you'll excuse me, I’m going to make a call to a friend with a Tracy OC that actually kicks ass and does stuff!

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COUNTS:

THE NEW AND IMPROVE LIGHTNING MCQUEEN- 16 (10)
ENZO THE STATUE- 14 (9)
DEPARTMENT OF REDUNDANCY DEPARTMENT- 12 (6)
I’M A NICE GUY, RIGHT? – 23 (15)
THAT’S NOT HOW DIALOGUE WORKS!- 22 (12)
HAND HOLDING- 18 (11)

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